It was wet and stormy night. Madison went throe a tunnel that led to the supermarket. When I went through the tunnel I heard voices. I said to myself should I go in or not. I would so I went through I was scared and also I was very very cold i was running and i fall. And I saw 2 little girls and there were shadows . I
Said quietly to myself i’m scared I raced my self through the tunnel. suddenly I stopped and looked. It got darker and darker the two little girls were running to me and I ran back. And my breath stopped so then I slowed down and then all the lights shut down. And I Fainted when I woke up I was in a house called the horror house. And I got possessed and I died.
And that is the end of the horror night.
Hi,I'm Sophie from Awahono School.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have used some good WOW words,like possessed and fainted, but maybe next time you could add a bit more detail and also if you double checked your spelling might have been a little better. Keep the good work up.
From Sophie.