Kia ora Skye. Your poster about sexism is off to a good start. I do have one question about what you wrote. You say: "Some people around the world are sexist because they are haters." I am curious what you mean when you describe someone as sexist. Can you say more?
Hi Skye , I very like how you try and persuade people to stop mocking others and to stop gossiping , I also think everyone should stop these things , Maybe next time you could check if your writing makes sense and if your writing has proper grammar. Good work.
Aloha Skye, I am a yr 7 student from TPS and just wanted to leave a comment! I like how you are trying to persuade people to stop mocking and gossiping in the blog post that you have created. I feel like you could try to add more detail about sexisim and make sure your punctuation is in the correct place. Over that great job.
Kia ora Skye. Your poster about sexism is off to a good start. I do have one question about what you wrote. You say: "Some people around the world are sexist because they are haters." I am curious what you mean when you describe someone as sexist. Can you say more?
ReplyDeleteHi Skye ,
ReplyDeleteI very like how you try and persuade people to stop mocking others and to stop gossiping ,
I also think everyone should stop these things ,
Maybe next time you could check if your writing makes sense and if your writing has proper grammar.
Good work.
Aloha Skye,
ReplyDeleteI am a yr 7 student from TPS and just wanted to leave a comment!
I like how you are trying to persuade people to stop mocking and gossiping in the blog post that you have created. I feel like you could try to add more detail about sexisim and make sure your punctuation is in the correct place. Over that great job.
-Edith