I really liked the way you spoke to your audience - you told them how much they wanted the aero and why! I also noticed at the end you began to use different vocabulary to describe the chocolate. We will continue to work on using descriptive and formal vocabulary.
Hi Skye,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you spoke to your audience - you told them how much they wanted the aero and why! I also noticed at the end you began to use different vocabulary to describe the chocolate. We will continue to work on using descriptive and formal vocabulary.