A good writer plans: why
Paragraph One: who,Room 6,7,8,9,10
Paragraph Two: what we went on adverse
Paragraph Three: when On November the 15 2016
Paragraph Four: where at motat
On November the 15th we went to a amazing place called motat. It had a lot of Technology. Technology was the thing we saw. First we went to our meeting space to talk with Abby about what we had to do. First we talked about our rules and then Abby said that first we will be going on a Tram ride.
I liked the tram because it was still available for us to use. I looked inside the Tram and it looked nice and tidy. Next we went over the road and we had to stop because the light was red. When I looked at the light it had red white and green colors a lot of people where saying that the Tram was so cool.
Then we had morning tea and then after morning tea we went to see the houses in the old village. The first house had a mannequin and dolls. They were really scared and we ran out. The next house was just a garage and a lot of people said I thought it was a house not a garage. So
Next we went to see games and look at some of the planes and did some experiments too.
And then after that we went back to school.
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