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Problem 2
Here is what we did i n room 5 for math I hope you enjoyed and please leave a comment and this is our way how we figured it out.
Problem 1
WALT : Illustrate who we solved each problem.
Here is what we did i n room 5 for math I hope you enjoyed and please leave a comment and this is our way how we figured it out.
Wednesday, 4 April 2018
Justifying an argument
Justifying an argument
WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions
Author A:
I strongly believe that students need school uniforms.
Students need school uniforms because they show people what school they go to.
Author B:
All of the students look tidy because they are in the same school and it’s like free advertising
because when people see the uniform they think of the school. So yeah, school uniforms are good.
Students need school uniforms because they show people what school they go to.
Author B:
All of the students look tidy because they are in the same school and it’s like free advertising
because when people see the uniform they think of the school. So yeah, school uniforms are good.
Author B:
I firmly believe that school uniforms should be banned. School uniforms are costly and
they put a lot of pressure on the student’s caregivers.
Children need new school uniforms every time they grow and change schools.
With some items of clothing costing a hundred dollars or more, the cost involved
in buying a new school uniform is huge! It is particularly difficult for families with
two or more students, as it is hard enough to feed a large family let alone buy an expensive
school uniform every year for each child. School uniforms should be banned for the benefit
of parents everywhere!
they put a lot of pressure on the student’s caregivers.
Children need new school uniforms every time they grow and change schools.
With some items of clothing costing a hundred dollars or more, the cost involved
in buying a new school uniform is huge! It is particularly difficult for families with
two or more students, as it is hard enough to feed a large family let alone buy an expensive
school uniform every year for each child. School uniforms should be banned for the benefit
of parents everywhere!
Which argument do you think is stronger? Author B: because this has given us more information.
aWhat vocabulary do the authors use that you would like to steal? Pressure , involve , difficult ,
and enough.
and enough.
What did you like about the paragraphs?I loved that they used lots of information
about why we don’t did uniform and why we need uniform
about why we don’t did uniform and why we need uniform
What do you think the authors could improve on?They could put pictures up next
to the writing .I think that Author A could improve their writing and use more information.
to the writing .I think that Author A could improve their writing and use more information.
Highlight the signposts (topic sentences) the authors use in purple.
I strongly believe that students need school uniforms. Students need school
uniforms because they show people what school they go to.
uniforms because they show people what school they go to.
Highlight the conjunctions or connecting words (for, because, and, but, as…)
that the authors use in blue.
that the authors use in blue.
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