Thursday, 9 June 2016

Skye Will He Save Her?

.Will He Save Her?
Narrative Writing

WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)

This week we are creating a piece of narrative writing about a comic book hero!

You are to use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. Not sure what this means? Well, the picture could depict what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next. Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that led to this action packed scene?

Fill in the below table to help you plan.

Your Thoughts and Answers:
Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?
Super girl
Spider man
Other Characters (if any):
There is a Bus that has no brakes.
It is bark and the sun site is going down so then supergirl saved her and

She has laser eyes and she has flirty and also she is strong and she can fight other super villains.
If beginning, what could happen next?
Then the world might of ended because.
If ending, what happened before this scene?
She saved the people on the bus.

Start Writing Here:

One day some robots invaded the earth. and wall supergirl was willing around she saw the robots trying to destroy the city and also a big robot tried to destroy the city but super girl saved the day and supergirl destroy the robot and the rest of the day was happily ever after day 2 years ago there was a fire boom and batman was trying to save the day but supergirl wanted the world to leave happily ever after but the batman came from the sun he wanted to save a girl from fulling of the tower 7 but batman missed and largely supergirl gort her and batman was about to catch her but he missed her but it was just fin.

1 comment:

  1. Skye, you did a very good job filling out your brainstorm, but I'm not sure that you used it when writing your story. For example, it says that your hook is going to be dialogue and you did not use dialogue at all in your story.