Hi Skye, I'm Sophie from Awahono School. I like how descriptive your writing is. I was wondering how long it took for you to write such an AMAZING story. One thing I think that might make your conclusion better is if you make the font all the same. Overall I think you did a FANTASTIC job on writing this. Here is a link to my blog if you want to check it out http://awahonosophieb.blogspot.co.nz/ Kind regards From Sophie.
Hi Skye, I'm Sophie from Awahono School.
ReplyDeleteI like how descriptive your writing is. I was wondering how long it took for you to write such an AMAZING story. One thing I think that might make your conclusion better is if you make the font all the same. Overall I think you did a FANTASTIC job on writing this. Here is a link to my blog if you want to check it out http://awahonosophieb.blogspot.co.nz/
Kind regards
From Sophie.