Wednesday, 30 August 2017

Skye The best holiday ever.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Skye, I'm Sophie from Awahono School.
    I like how descriptive your writing is. I was wondering how long it took for you to write such an AMAZING story. One thing I think that might make your conclusion better is if you make the font all the same. Overall I think you did a FANTASTIC job on writing this. Here is a link to my blog if you want to check it out
    Kind regards
    From Sophie.