Wednesday, 7 June 2017

Skye Horror Night

It was wet and stormy night. Madison went throe a tunnel that led to the supermarket. When I went through the tunnel I heard voices. I said to myself should I go in or not.  I would so I went through I was scared and also I was very very cold i was running and i fall. And I saw 2 little girls and there were shadows . I
Said quietly to myself i’m scared I raced my self through the tunnel. suddenly I stopped and looked. It got darker and darker the two little girls were running to me and I ran back. And my breath stopped so then I slowed down and then all the lights shut down. And I Fainted when I woke up I was in a house called the horror house. And I got possessed and I died.
                    And that is the end of the horror night.

1 comment:

  1. Hi,I'm Sophie from Awahono School.
    I really like how you have used some good WOW words,like possessed and fainted, but maybe next time you could add a bit more detail and also if you double checked your spelling might have been a little better. Keep the good work up.

    From Sophie.