Friday, 27 July 2018

Skye Choclate intro.

So this week in literacy I have been working on my own writing about Aero chocolate I hope you enjoy And please leave a comment.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Skye,

    I really liked the way you spoke to your audience - you told them how much they wanted the aero and why! I also noticed at the end you began to use different vocabulary to describe the chocolate. We will continue to work on using descriptive and formal vocabulary.